Critical Analysis Self-Assessment
The introduction was good. It has the hook required for the reader to keep reading. My word choice was not the best and I could have used some more specific words. My sequence was also not so good. The whole writing was in a bad sequence and also the word count was not met. The counterclaim part where I explained why some people do not think water pollution is such a big issue and do not pay much attention to it, was not very detailed. I should have written more in that part. The conclusion was also a little short. I could have written more about people who do believe in water pollution as a major threat and how to spread awareness about water pollution so more and more people can know how big of an issue it is.
I covered 1st learning outcome as I have read many different genres like articles and reports to write this critical analysis. I have covered 3rd learning outcome because throughout my writing process I considered many writing situations and how can I put it, so they are more effective and smoother. I also covered the 6th learning outcome as I did a lot of research online on the CUNY Databases and on the internet to find different sources.
